Tense in narrative: Activity 2
Activity 2: Past to present
The following extract uses past tense narration. Rewrite the extract, changing to present tense narration throughout. Take care to be consistent.
The dread came from nowhere. Without warning, my flesh began to crawl. I felt the hairs on my scalp prickle and rise. I couldn't see anything except the bear post and its cairn of stones, but my body braced itself. It knew.
Compare the two versions. Does changing the tense make a difference to the way the story comes across? Which version do you prefer, and why?
